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Topic: please comment on my design
- ravi h <hravi.87@gmail.com> Aug 02 05:26PM +0530 ^
hi,
i attached my PS design
please give feed back
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thankyou
ravi
- Joe Vasu de Van <jo@thecreativelounge.co.uk> Aug 02 12:58PM +0100 ^
Poor DesignŠ
Yours Sincerely
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From: ravi h <hravi.87@gmail.com>
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Date: Tue, 2 Aug 2011 17:26:38 +0530
To: <sitedesign@googlegroups.com>
Subject: [WD&D] please comment on my design
hi,
i attached my PS design
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- Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com> Aug 02 12:58PM +0100 ^
not bad. nut-tastic!
Liam
www.riak.uk.com
- shehbad shehbad <shehbad@gmail.com> Aug 02 05:29PM +0530 ^
Hi Ravi,
your design is good, but you are not using the right font, use the font
which anyone can read easily.
thanks and regards
Shehbaaz
- Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com> Aug 02 01:04PM +0100 ^
Joe you say the same shit... your website is "poor design" haha new website
coming soon. so do I when both our new site launches we can have it out on
here. (winner takes all)
Yeah actually the font on the nuts is hard to read but could be because its
a small image.
Liam
- Joe Vasu de Van <jo@thecreativelounge.co.uk> Aug 02 01:09PM +0100 ^
Liam
You have no clue when it comes to designŠ.
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From: Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com>
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Date: Tue, 2 Aug 2011 13:04:40 +0100
To: <sitedesign@googlegroups.com>
Subject: Re: [WD&D] please comment on my design
Joe you say the same shit... your website is "poor design" haha new website
coming soon. so do I when both our new site launches we can have it out on
here. (winner takes all)
Yeah actually the font on the nuts is hard to read but could be because its
a small image.
Liam
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- Nikoloz Burchuladze <nikoloz.burchuladze@gmail.com> Aug 02 05:12PM +0500 ^
Hi.
1. Try to make logo more smarter, use some bright colors.
2. don't use photoshop text none formatting on title, menu, and heading.
3. give design little shine, use gradients but very smooth one.
4. when maiking design, dont use this "lorem ipsum" text. try tu find
something similiar to sites content.
5. Fonts on main image are bad, change it.
6. in products box try to make list or something.
7. titles : Products news, Testimonials, make left aligned.
- Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com> Aug 02 01:18PM +0100 ^
haha yeah yeah I would show you my work in progress on my new site but you
would probably copy my content.
you have no clue how to be polite to someone trying to become a web
designer... It annoys me because I went threw the same shit when i
was learning.
like I said when our sites are up and running we can do a vote on here. to
see who is better at design.
On Tue, Aug 2, 2011 at 1:09 PM, Joe Vasu de Van
- Joe Vasu de Van <jo@thecreativelounge.co.uk> Aug 02 01:25PM +0100 ^
What? are you still going through puberty?Š. Sometimes its better to say
what you see then beat around the bush, if its poor design, then say so, not
encourage bad design.
Yours Sincerely
Joe Vasu de Van | Creative Director
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From: Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com>
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Date: Tue, 2 Aug 2011 13:18:41 +0100
To: <sitedesign@googlegroups.com>
Subject: Re: [WD&D] please comment on my design
haha yeah yeah I would show you my work in progress on my new site but you
would probably copy my content.
you have no clue how to be polite to someone trying to become a web
designer... It annoys me because I went threw the same shit when i was
learning.
like I said when our sites are up and running we can do a vote on here. to
see who is better at design.
On Tue, Aug 2, 2011 at 1:09 PM, Joe Vasu de Van <jo@thecreativelounge.co.uk>
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- Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com> Aug 02 01:27PM +0100 ^
i get that but rather than just saying poor design which comes off pretty
negative.
why not say why its a poor design. blah blah blah.
On Tue, Aug 2, 2011 at 1:25 PM, Joe Vasu de Van
- Joe Vasu de Van <jo@thecreativelounge.co.uk> Aug 02 01:36PM +0100 ^
I already gave my top ten design tips to an earlier post, not going to do it
again if no one bothers reading it. You either get design or you don't no
matter how much you educate someoneŠ. So by saying poor design.. that¹s
exactly what it means. The internet is a medium that has 20% good design and
the other 80% poor design. This is why not many people know what is good
from bad.
Yours Sincerely
Joe Vasu de Van | Creative Director
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From: Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com>
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Date: Tue, 2 Aug 2011 13:27:47 +0100
To: <sitedesign@googlegroups.com>
Subject: Re: [WD&D] please comment on my design
i get that but rather than just saying poor design which comes off pretty
negative.
why not say why its a poor design. blah blah blah.
On Tue, Aug 2, 2011 at 1:25 PM, Joe Vasu de Van <jo@thecreativelounge.co.uk>
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- Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com> Aug 02 01:39PM +0100 ^
I dont ever roll in to the groups I just get loads of emails which I reply
to so this guy may not have seen your post.
good design is easy just keep up to date with the latest trends and view
other great designers work and practice like no tomorrow.
On Tue, Aug 2, 2011 at 1:36 PM, Joe Vasu de Van
- ravi h <hravi.87@gmail.com> Aug 02 07:49PM +0530 ^
thanks for all suggestions i try to improve this.
On Tue, Aug 2, 2011 at 5:42 PM, Nikoloz Burchuladze <
- Joni Mueller <joni@jonimueller.com> Aug 02 09:56AM -0500 ^
Now THIS is constructive criticism. AND Niko is a kick-ass designer who doesn't seem to feel that sharing his knowledge with someone wanting to learn will pose a threat. :)
I'll add to Niko's punch list now.
1. The yellow is out of place with the rest of the color palette. It's not in the same color hue and seems jarring.
2. I agree about the typography. The "script" or "brush" font isn't doing it for me. I suggest possibly using a serif font for your titles. That mixes well with the sans-serif font of your body text. You can go a bit more "wild" with the "Nutts 'n' Spices" text to give a bit of visual interest.
3. Is it "Nuts 'n' Spices" or "Nutts and Spices" (in the footer). Consistency is the key.
4. "Powed" in the footer should be "Powered."
Joni Mueller
Pixelita Designs
http://www.pixelita.com
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From: sitedesign@googlegroups.com [sitedesign@googlegroups.com] On Behalf Of Nikoloz Burchuladze [nikoloz.burchuladze@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, August 02, 2011 7:12 AM
To: sitedesign@googlegroups.com
Subject: Re: [WD&D] please comment on my design
Hi.
1. Try to make logo more smarter, use some bright colors.
2. don't use photoshop text none formatting on title, menu, and heading.
3. give design little shine, use gradients but very smooth one.
4. when maiking design, dont use this "lorem ipsum" text. try tu find something similiar to sites content.
5. Fonts on main image are bad, change it.
6. in products box try to make list or something.
7. titles : Products news, Testimonials, make left aligned.
- Joni Mueller <joni@jonimueller.com> Aug 02 10:00AM -0500 ^
Well maybe he didn't "get your memo." Maybe he didn't read your article. And I think when people come to this group asking for a critique, they're looking for something specific to their design, not a cookie-cutter response. No matter. Hang on the group long enough and you learn who to listen to and who not to.
Joni Mueller
Pixelita Designs
http://www.pixelita.com
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On Tue, Aug 2, 2011 at 1:36 PM, Joe Vasu de Van <jo@thecreativelounge.co.uk<mailto:jo@thecreativelounge.co.uk>> wrote:
I already gave my top ten design tips to an earlier post, not going to do it again if no one bothers reading it. You either get design or you don't no matter how much you educate someone…. So by saying poor design.. that's exactly what it means. The internet is a medium that has 20% good design and the other 80% poor design. This is why not many people know what is good from bad.
- Harold Delk <hhdelk@gmail.com> Aug 02 11:07AM -0400 ^
Dear Joe:
Re: "The internet is a medium that has 20% good design and the other 80%
poor design."
- Poor use of the statistical method. (or to paraphrase you; "bad math.")
- The internet is not a medium.
*Regards,*
*Harold*
On Tue, Aug 2, 2011 at 8:36 AM, Joe Vasu de Van
- Harold Delk <hhdelk@gmail.com> Aug 02 11:09AM -0400 ^
Joni,
Good response to the troll.
Regards,
Harold
- Nikoloz Burchuladze <nikoloz.burchuladze@gmail.com> Aug 02 05:43PM +0500 ^
- Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com> Aug 02 01:45PM +0100 ^
"poor design" - Joe
This looks cool I like it. Thumbs up :)
Liam
www.riak.uk.com
On Tue, Aug 2, 2011 at 1:43 PM, Nikoloz Burchuladze <
- Nikoloz Burchuladze <nikoloz.burchuladze@gmail.com> Aug 02 05:50PM +0500 ^
let's live peacefully guys)
Topic: my design.. give feedback
- ernest okojie <nestkojex@gmail.com> Aug 02 08:45AM +0100 ^
please recommend one cms, so i can try it out. if i already have a site can
i still transfer it to a cms? and how do i do that?
thanks
- Liam Kenneth <liam.kenneth89@gmail.com> Aug 02 09:09AM +0100 ^
Try wordpress its good and SEO friendly
- Joni Mueller <joni@jonimueller.com> Aug 02 03:12AM -0500 ^
It sometimes depends on what features the site has or will have which CMS is chosen. I generally work with WordPress (since 2004), CMS Made Simple (since 2007), and MovableType (since 2002), and occasionally Drupal, GetSimple CMS and others. Others in this group may have their favorites, some of which I haven't mentioned, such as Joomla!, Silverstripe, Expression Engine, TextPattern, etc.
Any site can pretty much be ported to any CMS if you know what you are doing. The best thing to do is set up a sandbox somewhere for a handful of CMSs and learn them well. Best not to try to be jack of all trades, master of none, IMHO.
Joni Mueller
Pixelita Designs
http://www.pixelita.com
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From: sitedesign@googlegroups.com [sitedesign@googlegroups.com] On Behalf Of ernest okojie [nestkojex@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, August 02, 2011 2:45 AM
To: sitedesign@googlegroups.com
Subject: Re: [WD&D] Re: my design.. give feedback
please recommend one cms, so i can try it out. if i already have a site can i still transfer it to a cms? and how do i do that?
thanks
On Mon, Aug 1, 2011 at 2:41 PM, Joni Mueller <joni@jonimueller.com<mailto:joni@jonimueller.com>> wrote:
The design is very busy, there are way too many different fonts going on there. Good typography in design can be difficult to master, but it should be strived for nonetheless.
VALIDATE your HTML and CSS before posting your site for critique; it helps to shake out mistakes and typos (and other errors) in the stylesheet and HTML.
Why on earth this site isn't on some kind of CMS is beyond me; that simplifies a lot of issues right off the bat.
Topic: Traffic Report
- ernest okojie <nestkojex@gmail.com> Aug 02 08:58AM +0100 ^
You asre so funny. but really, how do i transfer the site to WordPress or
CMSMS? please its urgent.
Thanks
- ernest okojie <nestkojex@gmail.com> Aug 02 07:05AM +0100 ^
But apart from using meta tags do you know of any site or sites where i can
subnit my site name so they can do the necessary promotion
Thanks
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